I am a student at goldfields primary this is a place where i will be able to share my learning
with you please note....some work won't be edited just my first drafts,so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas
Hi Kiera, My name is Lucy, I love how you made this poem with this background. What site did you make it on? I also like that it rhymed. If you have a second, could you go to my blog and leave a comment, we are trying to get as many people from other countries as we can! http://lucy1215.edublogs.org/2019/11/21/week-7-holiday-traditions/ Thanks alot!
Good job on your post.Hopefully you will be able to write more poems and make people feel happy about the holidays.because being a holiday sad or not having a good time is going to make everything bad and not enjoyful.
Hi Kiera, I enjoyed your Christmas poem. You have presented it in a very attractive way. Although you have used only a few words, it says so much about what you think about the excitement of Christmas. Have a wonderful Christmas. Best wishes, Norah Colvin (SBC commenter)
I like your poem it is very unique. it tells a lot about christmas is. i hope to hear more from you.
ReplyDeleteHi Kiera, your poem is cool. I really like how it rhymed.
ReplyDeleteHere is my URL so you can look at my blog. https://kamden903.edublogs.org/wp-admin/post.php?post=35&action=edit Let me know what you think!
ReplyDeleteHi Kiera,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Lucy, I love how you made this poem with this background. What site did you make it on? I also like that it rhymed. If you have a second, could you go to my blog and leave a comment, we are trying to get as many people from other countries as we can! http://lucy1215.edublogs.org/2019/11/21/week-7-holiday-traditions/ Thanks alot!
Good job on your post.Hopefully you will be able to write more poems and make people feel happy about the holidays.because being a holiday sad or not having a good time is going to make everything bad and not enjoyful.
ReplyDeleteHi Kiera,
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed your Christmas poem. You have presented it in a very attractive way. Although you have used only a few words, it says so much about what you think about the excitement of Christmas.
Have a wonderful Christmas.
Best wishes,
Norah Colvin (SBC commenter)
I like your poem its seems like its from the doom
ReplyDeleteHi Kiera!
ReplyDeleteI love how creatively formatted your Christmas poem is! How long did it take you to make?
Alex
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Hi Kiera!
ReplyDeleteI love how creatively formatted your Christmas poem is! What’s your favourite part about Christmas?
Alex
www.blog44.ca/alexandriav